Opinion Matters

When I was completed my high school, I was planning to join the Nursing school. I asked my parents about my opinion, but they were against me and refused to help me. I joined my nursing school and after the first semester, I got full bride scholarship to complete my BSN. Finally, I was Registered nurse of Nepal (my country) and earned sufficient money what I needed. One day my dad was sick and he needed to take intramuscular Injection four times a day for one whole week.I heard that and I came to my dad house and helped a lot as a professional nurse and as a daughter.After that, they realized that I was right and they also encouraged my little sister for joining the nursing program. Now they also support me to complete my foreign (USA) nursing education.  

Muddiest point

When I am writing this type of essay, it is very difficult for me to find a good topic. Some time it is also difficult to provide enough evident to support the topic that means difficult to make 4-5 full pages of writing. However, you putted the assignment simple and very straightforward. I did not find any unclear guidelines of it. After reading the assignment sheet, I understand choosing a topic that has a larger base for details and arguments, not only for or against. Still I am confuse and difficult for me to choose the topic and gathered more supportive evidence to make my essay long. I think I have enough time to do it .Hope I will do my best.

"A morsel from the Garden of Eden"

Does the writer provide an introduction that grabs the reader’s attention?

Yes, the first line especially "it was my turn” grabs the reader’s  

attention. It makes me to read the whole story without discontinue.

 Does the writer focus on significant events in his or her life rather than trying to narrate   

 his or her entire life’s story?

Yes, he only focuses a singular event that is about how he has to take  

his grandfather while shopping.

Do the descriptions of the characters or important objects in the memoirs include  

sensory  details that help readers to visualize, hear, smell or feel them?

Yes, He gives some good description that makes me see exactly what he 

is describing like the food, facial expression of his grandfather while 

talking.   

Has the writer quoted speech or dialogue so as to reveal some important aspect of a 

character’s personality?

 Yes, he quoted speech and dialogue very well which helped me to           

 understand the characters much easier. 

Does the writer narrate or describe events in a way that allows readers to connect them   

to experiences or relationships in their own lives?

Yes, after reading this story, I remembered my 72 years old  

grandmother who always wanted me to go to grocery, but I did not 

keep that event as   

special. I realized from this story that event is affected the writer's life.

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 Has the writer explained the significance of the people, events, places, or objects in 

 shaping who he or she has become? Does this explanation make sense in relation to the

events, people, places, and things described throughout the memoir?

Yes, 

Does the writer provide a conclusion that reinforces the point of the story?

Yes,